This one turned into more of a 2000 word challenge, but it was fun to FINALLY finish the darn thing.
ERADICATION
Mark-Dalvin Alfod stared through his ten-power hunting scope mounted atop his six-thousand dollar Gross-Kaiser Mk XXXII bolt action rifle that used Seven Millimeter Magnum cartridges. Combined with the Kin-no-Ka (Gold Fire) variable scope, the rifle could put all five rounds in a one inch bullseye at four hundred yards. As the crosshairs of the scope settled on the young raccoon, it looked up directly at Mark-Dalvin as if it knew he was aiming at it. Then it slowly raised one paw (the right one) and while still looking back at Mark-Dalvin, and slowly moved its paw in a waving motion.
“Chuck, are you seeing what I’m seeing?” Mark-Dalvin asked his spotter. Chuck (yes that’s his given name) Kornienko shifted his spotting scope slightly to the left, and stared for a long moment without saying anything.
“I see it, MD. Is that little snot waving at us?” Chuck replied.
“I do think it is.” Mark-Dalvin said in an amused voice.
The two men made up A-K Exterminations, and had a thriving business in pest removal. Both were experienced hunters and specialized in large pest removal. Most of their efforts were toward coyotes and wild hogs in northwest Georgia. Both were ex-Marines who’d served in Afghanistan. Mark-Dalvin had two deployments, Chuck had one. They’d met and been teamed together during Mark-Dalvin’s second deployment and had hit it off. To their surprise, they found out they actually lived two blocks apart in Dalton, Georgia.
The fit seemed so natural that they went into business after their deployment, settling on an extermination service as it gave an outlet for the attitude and skills the Marines had drilled into them. Their first success was eliminating a feral dog pack that had attacked a child. The dogs had been savvy enough to avoid the local hunters, a number of whom were what one might say ‘skilled’ in tracking.
Chuck purchased and modified three drones which proved to be the solution. He tied the three to his state-of-the-art laptop and ran a comprehensive search pattern. The drones flew at one thousand feet as that way any high frequency noise from rotors or other moving parts would not be likely heard by the dogs.
Once the pack was discovered, it was tracked for two weeks by drone relays. Chuck had set the drones on a cycle of track and recharge, with the recharging done with landing stations set up in a central location of the pack’s territory. They successfully took the pack apart over the next two weeks, often taking a pack member or two with precision distance shots.
This success got them attention and more work, with each success rolling into more success and larger contracts for troublesome pests. Using tactics further refined by use, they became well known for delivering on contracts by eliminating droves of pigs, packs of coyotes, and other large pests. Then came a call about raccoons running rampant at night in Chickamauga with neighborhood pets being attacked and in some cases going missing.
So the call went out to exterminators to get rid of the pests. For Chuck and Mark-Dalvin, this job was a rude shock to their belief in professionalism. Simple bait traps didn’t work. Sitting on a nearby building with a silenced .22 never got a sighting, much less a shot at a raccoon. Eachnight was a cacophony of noise from two or three locations. All showed raccoon damage and/or wounded pets, but never any raccoons wherever they went. Nothing until today.
“Doesn’t this feel kind of weird Mark? That little shit’s looking straight at us, just waving that paw.”
Chuck’s voice was suspicious. All this time running around chasing their own tail and suddenly there’s one, just one raccoon in the middle of an open field, waving like it was supposed to be seen. It’s like this guy’s supoosed to keep our…OH SHIT! MOVE! MOVE! MOVE! Mark-Dalvin grabbed his rifle and ran, following Chuck. He looked the direction Chuck was running. Their pickup was rolling down hill at an increasing speed.
“No…nononononono…” Chuck said in despair as the truck unerringly aimed for a large tree and hit it at about twenty miles an hour, crunching the bumper and the hood, crushing the radiator between the tree and the engine. Mark-Dalvin spotted three raccoons tumble from the cab. He skidded to a halt and raised the rifle. A quick snap shot nailed one of the critters and a follow up shot killed another, the third was into the trees before he could get the third shot off.
“MD! What the hell happened with the truck?!” Chuck gasped as he ran to the pickup. The smell of anitfreeze permeated the air as the two men arrived at the red and yellow vehicle. The engine rattled to a stop.
“My truck! Chuck pulled open the driver door, and immediately three raccoons all full grown males, immediately powered into him and all four went down in a snarling screaming heap. Chuck screamed high and hard as he was bitten repeatedly Mark-Dalvin dropped his rifle in the truck bed and pulled his Glock, hoping to get a shot. He fired off line into the turf, and the raccoons scattered, actually running into the trees and staying in line with the tree to obscure his shooting. The raccoons screamed as they ran and one stopped to stare back at the two men, then ran a zig-zag path to dodge the pistol bullets.
Chuck howled in rage and bolted to his feet. He rummaged behind the driver’s seat and hauled out his pump shotgun. He grabbed a box of shells, slammed it open in the driver’s footwell and stufed his pockets with the loose shells. “I’M GONNA KILL THOSE MOFO’s!” he howled and started charging off after the raccoons. The one that had stopped to watch seemed to recognize the weapon and dropped to all fours dodging toward a tree, but a nine-millimeter broke it’s hip and the buckshot shredded the creature. Blood seeped scarlet into the snow and screeches emanated from deeper into the trees.
“This is weird Chuck. We need to get back to town.” Mark-Dalvin was upset. Chuck was bleeding from his scalp. His face was bitten up and he was nearly out of his mind in rage. Only Mark-Dalvin’s hand on his friend’s arm kept Chuck from following the raccoons into the woods.
“We can’t get back to town, in case you haven’t noticed, the truck’s dead!” Chcuk snarled. Mar-Dalvin realized that right now Chuck was badly hung up on the raccoons after they tried to maul him. I can’t blame him, they did a number on his scalp. I’d probably be pissed as hell too, but something just seems off in all this. He figured it would be smarter to let Chuck work off the mad he had on rather than listen to him complain all the way back to town.
He rummaged in the back of the truck, deciding against any long arms for this foray. He had his nine millimeter Glock and six fifteen round magazines plus one in the pistol. That should be enough. Mark-Dalvin also grabbed his large Arkansas toothpick from the back and then locked the cover so the critters couldn’t get into it. They got into the truck somehow, I guess we forgot to lock it. Not this time you crap little bandits.
He trotted to catch up to Chuck who’d started off singlemindedly following the raccoon footprints into the woods. Mark-Dalvin settled on his friend’s right so he could cover left with the shotgun.
“Kind of like Afghanistan only with more trees, eh?” MD said quietly as they moved forward. Chuck hunched his shoulders, a clear sign of irritation. Mark-Dalvin sighed to himself and quit attempting to get Chuck to talk. He kept checking right and back, looking for movement and unhappily not finding any. They ran this way, the tracks are clear, so how can those damn bandits disappear so fast?
The answer literally dropped in. Above Mark-Dalvin was a rustling sound which stopped him in his tracks. That stop saved him. The huge boar raccoon missed dropping on him by a hair’s width. Chuck wasn’t so lucky. He was hammered flat by a similar big raccoon, dropping directly on his shoulder and neck. Three more followed down with four others charging from under the snow. Chuck screamed as the raccoons commenced to maul him en masse. The shotgun went off once and then the screaming turned to a gurgling gasp.
MD was in motion the moment the other raccoons charged. He dropped three with four quick shots, then had to dodge the one that had nearly dropped on him. It had landed hard, and limped with a damaged rear foot. That didn’t stop its aggressive attempts to bite his ankle. It took four shots to finally stop his attacker, but the moment needed to save Chuck had long passed.
Mark-Dalvin looked over to Chuck and blood made the snow around his body crimson. His face was shredded, nose and lips were gone, his scalp hung partway over his face and his neck had been torn open just below his skull. They killed him! They’re going to get me!
Mark ran as fast as he could push himself in the snow. The raccoons followed behind him, screeching and spreading out, creating a crescent to his sides and behind. Fortunately, Mark-Dalvin was headed directly for the best protection he knew of. The pickup he and Chuck had bought for the business. It had an extended cab, room to hole up and fight back. He ejected the partly filled magazine and inserted a fresh one. You never waited to run out of bullets before changing clips, you changed to a full magazine first chance you got. Empty magazines in the middle of a firefight made for dead soldiers.
His lungs were near bursting when he cleared the remaining distance from the trees to the truck. The dead tree no foliage to hide any raccoons and there were no other trees around to break up any silhouettes with their branches. He was safe! He stumbled to the unlocked cab and grabbed the door, and raccoons boiled out of the cab, hitting MD in the chest, knocking him prone in the snow.
Pain lanced through his legs as more raccoons charged out from under the pickup, latching onto his legs and feet, and starting to tug him under the pickup. He fired the pistol, killing four on his right leg before a large male grabbed his wrist and chewed hard, tearing tendons and crippling him. Another grabbed his left arm, tearing and tugging at it. He tried to scream but a huge boar leapt on his chest knocking the wind out of him. It grabbed his face and began tearing at it, blinding him and muffling his agonized screams with its large body. Mark-Dalvin disappeared under the pickup where muffled screams faded to dying whimpers and finally silence.
Five weeks after search parties came up empty looking for the missing men, a farmer called in a request for a tow truck to take an abandoned vehicle off his property. The truck was identified as belonging to A-K Exterminations, and a search was done of the area. Evidence of human remains were found and DNA confirmed it was the two missing men. Cause could not be determined because the remains had been scattered by scavengers.